Walk; walk away from everything
That you experience, is hindering your progress
Vision, reacting to the conflicting reflections
Blinding lights bouncing off precarious objects
This commotion is a crevasse, will draw you deeper
Among the strewn desires, soul will lose itself
Before you realize, you will be obscurity personified
Trying to hold on to the spectre; all parallels
Will never culminate in a meaningful union
Walk, for you are a traveler of Eternity©
The closing line is a furtive glance at your creative brilliance. Makes for a wonderful reading experience😊😊😊
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Thank you so much for that wonderful appreciation. 🙂
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Beautiful. Your writing style is as unique as your viewpoints, leading to an overall enjoyable read. Thank you for works like this 🙂
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Thank you so much. 🙂 Really appreciate your wonderful comment.
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Nice one indeed.
P.S. Thanks for all the likes on my blog posts! 🙂
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Thank you so much. 🙂 It’s my pleasure reading your wonderful writings.
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🙂 haha..I don’t usually get likes and all so am rather flattered.
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Just keep writing with the same passion and likes and accolades will follow. 🙂 Creativity is a blessing.
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Sure. Thanks!
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🙂
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Hey, u know wt, I wrote that line of yours ‘ nothing can lure…’ in my exam today, 😛 .. hehe.
And this too is amazing
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That’s nice. 🙂 How was the paper? I know you must have written the best. I am glad, you liked this write.
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Hehe, it was good, glad my mind cooperated with me :p.
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That’s great. Keep your mind calm for the rest of the papers too and you will score well in all the papers. 🙂
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Thnq so much for such boosting advice, Amitav.
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You’re welcome, Sanskriti. 🙂
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^_^ ♡
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Only few thousands out of billions can think . The way you think.
Only few hundreds out of human kind can write. How you write. ☺
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Oh wow, I was not expecting that kind of appreciation. 🙂 It’s really kind of you, my friend. Stay blessed and best wishes, always.
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😊😊
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🙂
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