Coy irises spoke true feelings
Love in the bosom expressed eloquently
Filled with true passion
The world around blossomed with Love
Silence draped in glowing blushes
Lips that quiver in anticipation
Irises of feelings spoke of surrender
Souls drown in eternity©
Amitav Chowdhury 
EPIC PIECE😲
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Many thanks, Apeksha. 🙂
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Another really beautiful piece, Amitav! It brightened my day to have read it, much like a walk through a flower garden. Thank you.
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Tanya, thank you so much… but here it’s not the flowers but expressed about ‘cynosure of all eyes’ … may be that will give you a hint about the poem. 🙂
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That is what makes it so special…it is the layers behind the writing. My brain is so visual, that I always see the obvious imagery first, delight in that, and then start peeling it away…You do that brilliantly, btw!
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I would say that’s the beauty of poetry, interpretations make them vibrant. There have been many poetry written on blooming irises, but I though about giving it a different twist in my poetry. Rarely, eyes are described this way.
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I think that is why, as a writer who focuses on prose, I am so drawn to poetry. I learn from it, especially here on your blog, daily…
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Prose has it’s own rhythm it’s poetry in extended form (that’s what I feel), so dealing with a continuous flow of feelings in prose requires lot of skill and also ‘stream of consciousness’. Thank you, for putting across your perspectives, it is always a pleasure to discuss literature with you.
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I am so grateful to have fellow bloggers like you, Amitav, to learn with and from. It is a true blessing!
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As nice a title as the poem itself!
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Thank you, Kunal. 🙂
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You doing fine?
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Yes, Kunal, thank you for asking. But I see you writing less these days. Been busy?
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Was holiodaying…but am back! Have a piece scheduled for tomorrow, so do visit! 🙂
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That’s kool… sure, will look forward to reading your work. 🙂
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…and am experimenting with something this coming Monday – adult humour – on which also I’d appreciate your candour
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That’s an interesting genre… will be interesting read.
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