The journey cannot be beautiful enough
When eyes hold a stereotyped vision of the world
Escaping to new landscapes is a tiring experience
Destinations will provide superficial relief
Because dogmas are ingrained in every particle
Exceptional will and perception can usher change
Creation is a masterpiece with eternal artistry
There is wisdom everywhere but eyes fail to see
Only a pure vision can experience the brilliance
Many adventurers are prone to egotistic pursuits
A mind that comprehends deeper consciousness
Wisdom to kindle the flame of omniscient energy
Eternity it is and continuity of life will prevail©
Thank you so much for sharing my poetry.
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Hi Amitav, it’s an impressing poem and I love it.
I have to admit, that I am using a dictionary on a regular bases as well :-), while I am reading your poems. It is a challenge that I am gladly accept, as I can improve my English knowledge.
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Hi Carmen, Thank you so much for visiting my blog.
I am glad you like my writing.
As a writer I have to keep working on the language too; everyday a new learning for me.
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Hi Amitav, it’s a impressive poem and I love it.
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‘Because dogmas are ingrained in every particle’ means?
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Do you know what dogmas are? Have you read the poem thoroughly?
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Dogmas means tradition, I guess?
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More of beliefs… so here in this line if you get into the philosophy of existence, life is made of energy and particle are the building blocks (which carries memory) so, when there is continuity we tend to do things and act without comprehending but out of practice.
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Oh I get it. I guess this was actually one of your simplest poems :p otherwise many are so deep and vocabulary you use, I always need a dictionary for that 😂
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If you relate it to the Five elements of Nature (Earth, Water, Air, Fire, and Ether) it will be more relevant.
Vocabulary, Yeah lot of my readers have told me that. It just comes with writing. 🙂
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