Sliding towards a darker side of the day
There have been enough distractions and tiring thoughts
No regret! Heart was engaged to identify the heartbeat of life
Spine seems fragile but can bear the weight efficiently
Arched according to the curvature of life’s leanings
Body does start a monologue to narrate the undesirable burden
Eye rolling can gather all the rage that surrounds
Sometimes trailing life can lead nowhere
Left with the feeble strands of unfinished stories, all alone
Days fate are linked with the temperament of conscious mind
Hope still vibrates feebly, waiting to be resuscitated
Nature’s breath and crisp evening transform under last rays
Waiting passionately for the dusk to glow
Weave magic with the moonlight and slip away to dreamland©
You never fail in writing amazing ones Amitav!Love it😊
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Thank you so much, Sasha. 🙂
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“Hope still vibrates feebly, waiting to be resuscitated” I love this line Amitav and I completely relate to it
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Thank you so much, my friend. Glimmer of hope and magic of dreams is unraveled by the darkness.
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Sweet dreams, my friend – your words make me feel like I’m floating on a calm sea on my way to a faraway dreamland…
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Sweet dreams! In the darkness the soul can dream and feel the rhythm of thoughts.
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This sounds sublime…
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Quite inspiring and filled with positive vibes to deal with the down parts of life. Loved this one.
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Thank you, Sneha. Darkness is not a negative metaphor here. It is the time when senses can experience the magic of universe.
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Yha saw that how darkness had been used to present the positivity here,and indeed can’t agree to it more..
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The journey of a soul in a rudderless mission far away from contemplating truth with a confused consciousness … So lively a poem Amitav ! Love.
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Now when days carry shades of grey, solace and direction is sought with a passion to be in embrace of true life. After all, darkness can reveal unseen hues of light.
Thank you so much, glad, you liked this write. 🙂
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This is so beautiful and I feel like it’s passion filled too! Love the last few lines. ❤️
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Thank you so much. 🙂 Contemplation of a soul in silence, for in glow of darkness passion is evoked. ❤️
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Always such a deep thinker- I enjoy that about you. 😊
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Very kind of you. 🙂 Blessings!
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