Rushing through time will not gift life with extra seconds
Inconceivable turns take another route
Lacking in fluency, the mind cannot comprehend a rhythm
Sense of dizziness sets in with continuous pirouetting
Unable to comprehend the corresponding reflections
There may be many parallels with alternative destinies
Faithfully surrendering to the entirety of presence
Perspectives become clear when there is harmony
Brilliance of cosmic reflection can elucidate the purpose©
This line calls to me, ‘ Perspectives become clear when there is harmony’, something I both strive and long for. Thank you for this lovely write!
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Thank you so much, Kim. Without realizing the harmony we simply cannot enjoy the cadence of life’s soul.
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Cadence, what a beautiful word! Thank you for this…
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“Rushing through time will not gift life extra seconds.” This really sets the stage for your entire poem. We often rush all over the place, me, and it really does nothing in return. I had to learn to focus on one item at a time and embrace the idea some things don’t have to be worked on simultaneously. Well said, lovely reminder. 😊
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We are rushed through this journey, for sure. We live in demanding times, where slow pace is considered lagging behind. But again, many are realizing this and taking measures to gain control over busyness. Glad, you lined this write. 🙂
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“Unable to comprehend the corresponding reflections” that’s my fave line of this. Great post! 🙂
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Thank you so much.
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I really enjoyed the line: “Brilliance of cosmic reflection can elucidate the purpose.” Sometimes our thoughts turn out to be our worst enemies.
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Thank you so much.
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Wonderful verses.
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Thank you so much.
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