Evening carry the burden of the day tirelessly
It does so without a complaint; as a responsibility
Still manages to keep its tranquillity
Settles down and urges life to take it easy
Not to rush through the troubles and hastiness
Those who may not have listened
Argued with the fury borne out of insecurity
Thought, without thinking about you
Often, the burden of others cannot be unfelt
Although, twilight time is sacred
Looking closer to the soul of an evening
Reveals an affectionate soul
Willing to listen to the day’s experiences
Carrying the burden, till next time
~Amitav
Such a beautiful expression of twilight burdened by the morning. 🙂
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The evening feels like a cradle after all the busyness. 🙂
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Beautiful words ,perfectly penned.
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Thank you so much.
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You are welcome
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There are those who don’t hear and then there are those willing to listen any time.
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People settle comfortably surrounded by ego barriers. Listening is a problem!
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It is, isn’t it?
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Yes, everyone is eager to react but not listen.
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Beautiful personification in these lines and I love the soul of an evening, one able to listen and carry such burdens.
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Thank you so much. Yes, that’s the perfect word, ‘personification’. The imagination runs to relate human experiences with the surrounding. It feels comforting!
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You are kindly welcome. It’s one of my favourite literary devices to employ and your extended personification spoke to me. We can learn a lot from our surroundings.
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Beautiful post👍. Carrying burden will only reduce your happiness
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Thank you so much. Yes, you are right, carrying those burden is troublesome.
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